Nicholas Herring Discusses the Making of Your Breath in Charcoal
Canadian writer Nicholas Herring has discussed the writing of his Giller-longlisted second novel, Your Breath in Charcoal, describing a book that changed direction repeatedly during its earliest weeks. Herring cites Javier Marías…
Canadian writer Nicholas Herring has discussed the writing of his Giller-longlisted second novel, Your Breath in Charcoal, describing a book that changed direction repeatedly during its earliest weeks. Herring cites Javier Marías and László Krasznahorkai as stylistic inspirations for his attempt to write about blue-collar Maritime lives.
Nicholas Herring Discusses the Making of Your Breath in Charcoal
Canadian writer Nicholas Herring has discussed the unusual development of Your Breath in Charcoal, his second novel and a title on the 2026 Giller Prize longlist.
Herring says he began the manuscript believing he was writing one story, only to discover within weeks that the book wanted to become something else. Its direction shifted again before he finally recognised the larger shape of the novel—a process that allowed the story to emerge through writing rather than from a fixed plan.
Among its literary influences, Herring points to Javier Marías and László Krasznahorkai. His initial ambition was to write about blue-collar Maritime characters while drawing upon stylistic possibilities he associated with those writers.
Published by Goose Lane Editions, Your Breath in Charcoal follows Knickle, a young Islander whose journey begins with a drive to northern New Brunswick and expands into an odyssey through work, friendship, love, loss and life beyond his familiar surroundings.
Herring's approach to revision was comparatively restrained. He says he produced one principal draft followed by several passes, cutting material near the end and changing some secondary characters. The novel's final section, however, arrived essentially in its finished form.
Your Breath in Charcoal follows Herring's debut, Some Hellish, winner of the Atwood Gibson Writers' Trust Fiction Prize. The new novel returns to working lives and Canada's East Coast while considerably expanding the scale of Herring's fictional journey.